P.W. 2/20/18

I chose the three quotes from the book to write about in my first essay. I wasn't too hard to get it into two pages i made it to two pages and a quarter so I was able to condense my writing a lot while getting my point across quickly. I like not having to print out our drafts because we save paper and also everyone is able to see the drafts from online, i just think we should have edit access next time that way we can comment on the google doc instead of the blog. The so what is the point in that we fully understand and grasp the ideas that the author was trying to present and also how we interacted and talked to the text, the ideas we built in our own perspectives. It is important to understand our own critical thinking because we can reflect on how the idea is more broad not like black and white. I don't know why i am not sure about this essay. I feel like I didn't get my point across and as if it is not my strongest. I hope I did well and I hope for the next essay I could get more time to go get some help from either Tammy of Professor Dan.