1. I thought the quotes were really good because they followed TEA paragraph and they flowed with the paragraph. You also made sure to say the authors name in the first one but don't forget to say it in the second one or put it at the end in parenthesis. You talk to the text by showing what they lottery of birth means and about where people grow up.
2. You connected your quotes very well, you use TEA method. There was good context in the beginning and good explanations after the quote. You understand the arguments and main points well in the essay.
3. The writers essay is important because it is different then what we did before. I just say don't forget to talk about your annotations, but you do a very good job with your quotes and how you explained the book.
The very first sentence of the essay talks strait into the book before you introduce the book. You might want to introduce the book before you go into detail about it. Make sure you add a page number to all your quotes (the lottery of birth) to make sure the quote you are analyzing is backed up by the authors.
1. I thought the quotes were really good because they followed TEA paragraph and they flowed with the paragraph. You also made sure to say the authors name in the first one but don't forget to say it in the second one or put it at the end in parenthesis. You talk to the text by showing what they lottery of birth means and about where people grow up.
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3. The writers essay is important because it is different then what we did before. I just say don't forget to talk about your annotations, but you do a very good job with your quotes and how you explained the book.
4. Yes
The very first sentence of the essay talks strait into the book before you introduce the book. You might want to introduce the book before you go into detail about it. Make sure you add a page number to all your quotes (the lottery of birth) to make sure the quote you are analyzing is backed up by the authors.
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