PW 12/12

I chose to look at my essay #3 edits and issues because this seemed like the one with the most mistakes. To me it looks like I need to fix a lot of grammatical and structural errors. I googled sentence clarity because that was also an issue I encountered and it basically means, Use clarity in a sentences. So I will edit that and see if I can have a better essay 3 that way my portfolio is as good as can be.