PW 11/30

My revision plan for essay #2 is to look through what professor Dan has proposed and see if I would like to take his advice. I think I will take some pointers from professor Dan but also put my own twist into it that way it will be original and my own. 

What I will do to revise:

• Look over the feed back
• understand what I am asked to fix
• come up with a way to fix my missing information
• fix my grammatical errors 
• make sure everything flows nicely 
• incorporate more of what is asked for