PW #4

For my draft I was trying to gather up ideas of what I would write. I plotted down ideas of my opinions and what interested me to write about. I think for this essay I would like to focus on how to arrange my essay in a clear way, to make it flow more. I want to leave how not have my essay just all over the place. I would like to learn a new way to come up with good transitions and how not to be so repetitive.